By Alissa Turensky Mack

I’ve seen such a place
That’s lovely and green
Expanses so vast
Cradling beauty obscene
Water so blue, so clear, and defined
Seemingly untouched by man and time
Flowers are nestled in the nooks
Of majestic trees
Creatures of all sizes, living as they please
The sparkling sky
And the whispering breeze
Foretell of times past
Of wonder and mystery
All in harmony, all of nature compliant
The fauna that lived there
Had no thought to be defiant
For why would one oppose
Living in an aura of love?
Knowing they were fondly placed
There from a hand up above
You might be thinking
Does this place really exist?
Where love and happiness surround
Us in a luminous mist?
You’re probably thinking I write
Of a mystical land
Beauty of that magnitude
Exuding from Spirit’s hand
I dare you, look up
From your technology
It’s been right before you
This whole time
You just couldn’t see.

1. (Bible) Old Testament Also called: Garden of Eden the garden in which Adam and Eve were placed at the Creation
2. a delightful place, region, dwelling, etc;a paradise
3. a state of great delight, happiness, or contentment; bliss

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About The Author
My name is Alissa Turensky Mack. I enjoy writing poetry and short stories, as well making many DIY projects.
My fiance, Brandon, and I live together with a dog, a cat, a rabbit, a betta fish, and much greenery on the Minnesota/Iowa border.

If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to get in touch with me via comments below.


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4 thoughts on “Eden

  • May 3, 2016 at 22:01

    This is the best poem I’ve read in a long time !! Keep them coming Alissa Turensky Mack!!

  • May 4, 2016 at 19:02

    Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I appreciate your kind words and yes! I will continue to write and share.

    Thanks again, Julie!

  • October 26, 2016 at 10:26

    That’s more than sesilbne! That’s a great post!

  • November 3, 2016 at 23:33

    Thank you for your kind words! It is much appreciated! 😊



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